Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:
• thank them for the invitation
• mention what plans you already have
• suggest when you can meet them
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr and Mrs Pattinson,
Hello, how are you? I hope you both are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to ask for forgiveness as I will not be able to be present at the party.
I thank you both for inviting me to the house warming party that you are organising next Saturday. I am very excited to attend the social gathering and I am sure that everyone present there will have lots of fun and enjoyment together.
However, I will not be able to attend the party as I have a prescheduled plan. Next Saturday I have to attend the 50th Wedding Anniversary of my Uncle and Aunt. The party is to take place in Hotel Radisson and I have been given the responsibility to make arrangements for food, drinks, decorations and cake for the party. As a result, I have a lot of work to complete
Once again, I am really sorry for not being a part of your party, although, I was very excited to meet you and spend a lovely evening at your place. I hope we can meet this weekend for dinner at The Taj Hotel and spend some quality time together. Please do let me know when can you do that.
I wish you all the best for your party. May you spend a wonderful time with your guests
Take care and see you soon.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t be able to be present at the party. I thank you both for inviting me to the h...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... that you are organising next Saturday. I am very excited to attend the social ga...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, really, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23849372385 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3786307281 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539748953975 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4393812982 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3571428571 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373118543486 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124697934176 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085660435272 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15740893516 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876997513671 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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