your next door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. because of the loud music you often lose sleep.
write a letter to your neighbor. in your letter
- describe the situation
- explain the problem it is causing you
- offer at least one solution
Dear Ali,
How're you? How's your family. Hope things are Ok at your ends. I'm writing to you to discuss an issue with you.
Well, as I know, you like to listen to music; you're fond of it, but there's a small problem is happing to me. I believe that you prefer to listen to music before sleeping seeks for relaxation. As a matter of fact, I sleep at 10 pm, and you listen to music at 12 am; you're using a loudspeaker which makes the sound very high.
So, due to the high volume of sound, I can't sleep well. As a consequence, I might wake late, and I can't reach my job on time; this makes to be a problem at my work.
Let me add this, I recommend that if you can listen to music before 10 pm, it will be better for me. So, I can sleep, and you can make what you want.
Your prompt response is highly appreciated. Thank you in advance.
Lots of love,
Ahmed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Ali, Howre you? Hows your family. Hope things...
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Dear Ali, Howre you? Hows your family. Hope things are Ok at your...
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...amily. Hope things are Ok at your ends. Im writing to you to discuss an issue with...
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...as I know, you like to listen to music; youre fond of it, but theres a small problem ...
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... listen to music; youre fond of it, but theres a small problem is happing to me. I bel...
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...peaker which makes the sound very high. So, due to the high volume of sound, I c...
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...a consequence, I might wake late, and I cant reach my job on time; this makes to be ...
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... sleep, and you can make what you want. Your prompt response is highly appreciat...
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Suggestion:
... Thank you in advance. Lots of love, Ahmed
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... in advance. Lots of love, Ahmed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.07558139535 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10990446778 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633720930233 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1544624727 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.0714285714 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2857142857 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348860742742 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119863181596 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687369211238 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192092550093 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099884487436 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.9 8.37731958763 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.5 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.16 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.