Your next-door neighbor owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night.
Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something is done about the dog. Include in your letter:
-Your reason for writing
-What you would like to happen
-A nice, respectful style.
Dear Ms. Seju,
I am writing to request you to have control over your dog, as it is making barking noise on my apartment side wall all days and nights. It became very hard for me to get good enough sleep at night after a long day at work.
Let me explain my situation in detail, I am working in a company in the morning shift and I have more responsibilities at work to complete them before the due date. For a few days, I am hearing a wall scratching noise from your apartment and it drives me crazy at night. I still remember that the big dog you previously owned was quiet and enjoyable, however, the current small one is a very angry and noisy type.
Would you kindly control your dog, and make sure it is not starving or having any bugs issue in its fur. There is an animal doctor near the street corner and it is open 24x7. The doctor is a friendly and helping nature type of person. If you keep your pet in a cage would be appreciated.
I respect your cooperation and understanding of my situation related to my work and personal life. Thanks in advance for trying your dog silent at night time.
Yours sincerely
Amit Savaliya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... before the due date. For a few days, I am hearing a wall scratching noise from your apart...
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Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ndly and helping nature type of person. If you keep your pet in a cage would be ap...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38139534884 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42317993007 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637209302326 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7399442262 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284307198671 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107585255456 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794382478625 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173936044086 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383064080751 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.