Your office building doesn't have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
Explain the problem
Suggest a solution
Say why parking will benefit all employees
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to let you know that finding a parking place became an exhausting problem during the last three months as a new shopping mall has opened in 200 m away from us. Therefore, most of the time employees including me, who are working at the south department of the company, have to spend more than an hour to find a free spot.
There is a free area next to the building and is surrounded by fences, which seems a great spot as a parking area. I suggest that the company buy this part of the ground from its owner, Mr. Axel. This would help the employees tremendously and increase their job satisfaction significantly since they do not need to look for a parking spot for about one hour. It also offers better efficiency for the company as people are fresher and happier at work.
I hope you find this suggestion useful and feasible. By the way, I have the contact information of Mr. Axel and may send them upon to your request.
Yours faithfully,
Sore Ashkani.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, therefore, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68333333333 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52603114259 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4486048211 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152118984524 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571488668223 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030904389198 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877889198749 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0040859970839 0.0580467560999 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.