In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers and television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer?
There is no doubt that technological development in the field of education has changed the way, a student learns. The search for information has become easier and amusing, and connectivity has expedited the data availability. On the contrary, students studying at traditional schools would have teachers, who could guide them for the knowledge enhancement. In this essay, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
Nobody can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with computers. Children can learn any subject using internet; starting from basic alpha...
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