Tourism, for most of the countries around the globe has been a major source of an economy. However, the growing tourism sector as a global business has brought a lot of concerns regarding cultural mix, environment pollution and many mores. Consequently, both sides of international tourism are highly contentious.
First and foremost, the soaring tourism businesses have created a lot of space in each country's economy. For example, my country has been earning a much amount of money from tourists who come to climb mountains particularly Mt. Everest every year. Similarly, Australia is making a l...
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