Inventors are not as important to society as a doctor. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
I disagree with this statement. This is because in my opinion, the inventors are as important as a doctor in society. We need the inventors to discover the technology that including in it as a medicine. We also need the inventors to develop the technology. The development of technology can make our life easier. The development of technology that I mean is not only in engineering but also in healthcare field.
Nowadays, the inventors help people to make their life easier. They research about all aspect of life. In healthcare field, the inventors develop the way to cure people efficiently. The inventors also develop the way to help people with different ability. Today we can find human with different ability wear the robotic arm or leg. We also can find people who take the advantage from the invention of the inventors, for the example: vaccine.
From my explanation above, I can take the summary that the inventors are as important as a doctor. This is because they also help people. The inventors same as the doctor, they help to make people life easier with their skill. The inventors help people to continue their life easily. Then the inventors are important too to our society.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-14 | anae | 78 | view |
| 2020-01-13 | AlMightylord86 | 89 | view |
| 2020-01-09 | Abdullokh | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-08 | uzubermy1@gmail.com | 61 | view |
| 2020-01-06 | ssb | 61 | view |
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face to face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letter, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and detail to support your answer. 73
- Inventors are not as important to society as a doctor. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 72
to discover the technology that including in it as a medicine
Description: can you re-write this sentence? 'it' refers to what? Be sensitive to use 'it'.
Today we can find human with different ability wear the robotic arm or leg
Today we can find human with different ability to wear the robotic arm or leg
Sentence: The inventors same as the doctor, they help to make people life easier with their skill.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and life
flaws:
No. of Words: 204 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 204 350
No. of Characters: 963 1500
No. of Different Words: 88 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.779 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.721 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.604 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.159 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.412 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.405 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.52 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.237 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5