It is important to ensure that children with a wide range ability and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Now days, children in school has vary of friends with different cultures and they may have more talented than other. I agree with the statement that crucial to make sure that our children ability and with who they are in society.
Firstly, children who have large ability means that they have some of skills and adult have to mention it to make sure that children can improve their skills better every day, if it run well, there so many advantages, for example: if parents aware that their children have ability to be a good singer it will be a source of more income for their family.
Moreover, parents have to realize that their children have a good social in school community. Student with a good social community will have more experienced to talk, select a friend in the future and knew how to lean together with other. For example: if student join the organization in school, absolutely she will have knowledge about how to organize some event.
However, now parents and adult have no time to concern that crucial thing because they are busy on their job and their daily activity. Some parents just leaf their children to the nanny who can take responsible for their son, from early morning until they back to sleep, major parents did not realize that important thing that they have to know what the children have to improve.
In conclusion, older generation have to ensure that the young people have got a good in attention in their daily activity even in their school or other place. This is really crucial because they are just grown up and have got more guidance to know which way a good to be reach.
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Sentence: Now days, children in school has vary of friends with different cultures and they may have more talented than other.
Description: The fragment Now days is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Now with adjective
Description: A verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to has and vary
I agree with the statement that crucial to make sure that our children ability and with who they are in society.
I agree with the statement that it is crucial to make sure that our children's ability and with whom they are in society.
how to organize some event.
how to organize some events.
older generation have to ensure
older generations have to ensure
young people have got a good in attention
young people have got a good attention
Sentence: Some parents just leaf their children to the nanny who can take responsible for their son, from early morning until they back to sleep, major parents did not realize that important thing that they have to know what the children have to improve.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to leaf and their
Description: The fragment they back to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace back with adjective
to know which way a good to be reach.
to know which way is a good to reach.
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 286 350
No. of Characters: 1297 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.112 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.535 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.744 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.178 0.07
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