Museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not the local people. Why is this so? What could be done to encourage more local visitors? Please include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Travelling is spreading its horizon since the world is turning to a global village. Presently, it is claimed that the interest towards visiting museum or historical sites is much lesser among local people where as such places are believed to be center of attraction among tourists of different corners. Here, I would like to account for reasons behind this phenomenon and ways to incite local people towards such landmarks.
There are plenty of reasons behind it. First and foremost, local people are well familiar with the history, activities and surroundings of these visiting places as they h...
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