Nowadays, the way people adquire new devices has change compare to twenty years ago. The E-comerce is revolutionating consumers lifestyle. In this essay I will extend the reasons and factor I am on favor.
No one can deny theat new technologies has its advantages, the main reason to believe this is that make our life much easier. Also, internet has a positive effect in the maner people acquire new devices or gadgets. Due to E-comerce many people has access to a mixture of equipment that in some cases are cheaper than those sale in traditional stores. A second reason here is that the client pay in a more secure method, the credit card or debit card. A good example of this type of service is Amazon, which is of the most powerful company, specialized on selling products. This online company offer an excellent garantee in case the client has an inconvenient with the product.
On the other hand, many people do not feel confident to make an online purchase, because do not understand the system or because there are many malicious people who try to steal the credit card information.
A particular good example of this is that banks are offering to the clients more online advice and there are increase the internet regulations to avoid bad situation. Due to the increase popularity of online transactions, including online purchase. Governments create public institutions in order to receive complaints for irregular transactions or online fraud to consumers.
In conclusion, it seem to me that new technologies and way of trading are changing consumers lifestyles in every way. However, I strongly believe that the advantages of this new way of commerce outweight the disavantages.
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- New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumer.To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...raud to consumers. In conclusion, it seem to me that new technologies and way of ...
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...of commerce outweight the disavantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'in some cases', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.296774193548 0.247107548796 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.148387096774 0.15552993741 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106451612903 0.0946569551029 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0354838709677 0.0501201869031 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0225806451613 0.0437536398559 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.122223957237 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0129032258065 0.0403219363162 32% => More participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.86497707359 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0387096774194 0.0326786765898 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.11935483871 0.0861751148067 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00645161290323 0.0214082191602 30% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00967741935484 0.0119246538136 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1704.0 1933.38276553 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 316.052104208 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0 6.10592293882 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20519365927 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380281690141 0.37474360046 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274647887324 0.284197041944 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183098591549 0.203843217982 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130281690141 0.137313986986 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86497707359 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573943661972 0.560935902166 102% => OK
Word variations: 60.2542944015 60.7401812628 99% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0911823647 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9333333333 20.7725350517 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4628705076 49.5273876611 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 93.4120437189 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 15.2821509519 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.594174754866 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01102204409 80% => OK
Readability: 46.3981220657 49.1922392462 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.984375 1.69127372897 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316294006255 0.332604825255 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11119792938 0.102734651613 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0660909122558 0.0668474354756 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571417813186 0.534917948617 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15769870569 0.148666948902 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124342320975 0.13441755203 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753845136077 0.0742828286743 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.263437391968 0.324241079732 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0397031496042 0.0640056729886 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196043554145 0.22793763319 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680363200161 0.0582452615562 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41883767535 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.88977955912 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.60220440882 77% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.00200400802 150% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.493987976 86% => OK
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Rates: 76.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9