Nowadays companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. Think about jobs where uniform is important. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?

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Nowadays companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. Think about jobs where uniform is important. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?

Submitted by Justin on Sun, 07/20/2014 - 02:20

Uniform combines someone with ideal principles appealing to well being of working sector. Presently, wearing uniform has become necessary at work places to maintain standard of work by setting up benchmark for workers. Here, this essay will account for pros and cons of wearing uniform along with jobs where uniform is first need.

There are multifarious sectors where uniform is a need of hour. Firstly, without uniform working places are like 'a bird without wings'. To illustrate, uniforms not only relize someone his responsibilities being a part of organization but also make him obedience to ...

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Sentence: To illustrate, uniforms not only relize someone his responsibilities being a part of organization but also make him obedience to rules and regulations.
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Sentence: For example, uniform develops a sense of equality among people of different racials, casts and categories like haves and have-nots.
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Sentence: As a result, it vanishes descrimination and therefore workers make combined efforts for achieving targets.
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Sentence: Hence, it makes it easier to stop entrance of outsiders at work places to avert any mishappenings.
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Sentence: Initially, destitute people may find it difficult to afford expensive dresses for thier children especially in schools or colleges in this era of inflation.
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 419 350
No. of Characters: 2188 1500
No. of Different Words: 254 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.524 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.222 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.751 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 178 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 139 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 56 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.115 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.279 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.808 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.248 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.436 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.051 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

sir, the pattern of writing you told me earlier :-
1. Yes, it is a correct pattern.
This is a similar pattern we
recommended for essay body:
Para 2:First,reason 1 (1 sentence)
+ why reason 1(some arguments.
2-3 sentences) + examples for
reason 1 (around 2 sentences) +
small conclusions (like advantages
of reason 1 or comparisons if not
reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
2. Sure you can transfer this to
your students.

but I explain first reason (only one sentence) but dont write 2 -3 arguement sentences n just only put example - where I discuss arguements to justify reason first n then reasoned conclusion ...

after writing one idea with example , next ideas is written directly by using linkers n then conclusion

I want be assured firmly that the way I write is excellent for getting 7.5 or 8.0 for my students in their real test..as I give model answer to them after writing here on tst big. com ...

please tell me ... is my style to form essay is excellent to secure 7.5 or 8.0 in real ielts test ...?????????

I have such doubts becoz I found essay written on ielt-blog scoring 8.0 bands but there was no conclusion for every idea bt they had 2 - 3 arguments n then example ...as I write only one sentence n jst after example n conclusion for every idea

So, please make every thing clear to convince me . .?????????????

We didn't see anything wrong with your style or pattern.

The pattern we suggested could be applied to all users and for all essay levels. But since you are advanced essay writers, you can do anything which you think it is good for the essay topic.

At the end, there is no pattern.

We have figured out there are some users following your writing styles and they did pretty well. The only issue is grammar and language.

oh yeah they all are my students .... n can they score at least 7.0 or 7.5 in their real ielts test if they write in same way as they write essays on test big.????

n tell me how many ideas could be good to explain by putting example in ideas in just one single essay .??????
.n after ideas with example ,,, how we can explain next ideas.??????

yes, for sure. A lot of successful stories:

http://www.testbig.com/question/ielts-result
http://www.testbig.com/ielts-essays/some-people-prefer-spend-their-live…

There are no fixed rules for how many ideas. The basic rule is: one paragraph at least for one idea. And you don't need to limit yourselves to the patterns. It depends on topic.

There is a user having the same style like you did, but some changes, you may take a look:
http://www.testbig.com/users/hao