One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Essay topics:

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Over the past 50 years, people have become used to the idea that they will probably live longer than their grandparents did. However, a longer life is only desirable if you can look after yourself and be independent, otherwise there can be disadvantages for everyone.

If you walk into a hospital in my country, you are likely to see a lot more elderly people that you did in the past. In fact, this is causing significant problems as there is a shortage of beds. Medical treatment is keeping the elderly alive, but at what cost to others?

On the top of this, one of the biggest medical problem...

*** The full content of this essay is available to VIP readers

Votes
Average: 8 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2020-01-24 Adilrahi 73 view
2020-01-23 CharanpreetSingh 78 view
2020-01-13 SUSANNA PETROSYAN 78 view
2019-11-28 Phuong25 73 view
2019-10-08 Saahaar 89 view
Essays by user eddysuaib :

Comments

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 309 350
No. of Characters: 1308 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.193 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.233 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.275 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.869 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5