School Uniforms should be there or not?
Uniforms ensures unity and aesthetic values in an educational environment.Nowadays uniforms have become an issue in the modern society. In this essay, I would like to accord the given statement.
Firstly, Uniforms erases the intangible gap between the students from poor and wealthy families. For instance, children from rich families can easily purchase new outfits for every season. On the other hand, children coming from poor stricken families are ignored and isolated by the way they get dressed. Thus, similarly dressed students are treated equally and there is no place of discrimination.
Secondly, parents face financial menaces and are not able to purchase new dresses for their children in every season. Therefore, children feel distraught when their wishes are not fulfilled. Uniforms are affordable at reasonable prices.
Moreover, Uniforms save time. For example, students waste their time in looking for eye catching outfits. Consequently, they also pay much attention to their physical appearance including clothes and hairstyles. Wasting time on these things is definitely unreasonable.
In conclusion , within the rules of uniforms , students can be more creative.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'similarly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'by the way', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246305418719 0.247107548796 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.167487684729 0.15552993741 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103448275862 0.0946569551029 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0344827586207 0.0437536398559 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108374384236 0.122223957237 89% => OK
Participles: 0.064039408867 0.0403219363162 159% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97982773042 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0147783251232 0.0326786765898 45% => More infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0689655172414 0.0861751148067 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147783251232 0.0214082191602 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00492610837438 0.0119246538136 41% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1196.0 1933.38276553 62% => OK
No of words: 179.0 316.052104208 57% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.64444444444 6.10592293882 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20519365927 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.45251396648 0.37474360046 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.391061452514 0.284197041944 138% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.296089385475 0.203843217982 145% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145251396648 0.137313986986 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97982773042 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68156424581 0.560935902166 122% => OK
Word variations: 72.7544360921 60.7401812628 120% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0911823647 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.7857142857 20.7725350517 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.981785272 49.5273876611 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7564766839 93.4120437189 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9844559585 15.2821509519 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30569948187 0.594174754866 220% => Too many Discourse Markers.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01102204409 140% => OK
Readability: 51.8918595371 49.1922392462 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.51785714286 1.69127372897 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.110690248028 0.332604825255 33% => More coherence wanted between essay topic and essay body.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.08445275581 0.102734651613 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0509522680786 0.0668474354756 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552435101445 0.534917948617 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184559909088 0.148666948902 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436353846558 0.13441755203 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426790097356 0.0742828286743 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.1187023296 0.324241079732 37% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0374381602549 0.0640056729886 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698930041922 0.22793763319 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349082931871 0.0582452615562 60% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41883767535 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.88977955912 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.60220440882 231% => Too many negative topic words.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.493987976 114% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 55.0 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.0 Out of 9