In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Obesity and its bad effects on health has always been an issue of concern. In developed countries especially, average weight of people is on rise and is consequently affecting their health adversely. In this essay I will be discussing various causes of obesity and at same time throw some light on ways by which we can overcome this problem.
To begin, according to me , the eating habits are the number one reason leading to increased weights. In their busy lifestyle, people find eating outside in a restaurant or just microwaving the frozen food more convenient than cooking. They do not realiz...
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Sentence: We should eat heathy and exercise to keep ourselves fit and happy.
Error: heathy Suggestion: healthy
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