Some educationalists argue that non-exam, art-based subjects, such as music, drama art and craft, should be compulsory in the secondary-school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Art is seen as one of the most important aspects in our life. It can promote better feelings, create balance in life and a form of creative relaxation. This is why some people believe it is crucial for art activities such as drama, music and craft-skill classes to be another compulsory subjects in junior and senior high schools curriculum. However, in my opinion, art classes should not override the importance of academic subjects, such as mathematics or English.
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