Some people believe children spending time on TV, video and PC games are good, but others believe that is bad. Talk about these two views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe children spending time on TV, video and PC games are good, but others believe that is bad. Talk about these two views and give your own opinion.

Entering into the age of information technology, individuals discover that their lives are predominated by electronic devices. Therefore, nothing has been so much debated as the impact of such devices on children. Some are of the opinion that spending time on TV, video and PC games is good for children, whereas other are opposed to this. Personally, I agree with the former.

Admittedly, these technological innovations impose negative influence on the younger generation to some extent. To be specific, they may cause physical damages. For instance, suggested by medical professionals that a lo...

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