Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are complete wast of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are complete wast of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Education has become a major priority of today's human's life. Majority of parents are worrying about their educational standards and try to give best education for their children. Therefore, they are much more focus on kids day today schedule. Leisure time is something essential for growing kids. There is a tendency among current parents, making their youngsters schedule more educational. Even the very little spare time they get after huge work load from the school.

While many elders come up with the idea of educational leisure-time activiti...

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