The way how people should acquire useful abilities remains a controversial matter that always opens the door for a lot of discussions and debates. It is considered by some that individuals are completely capable of becoming well-educated through self-study. Some others, on the contrary think that it might be protracted and misleading. At the end of the day, we still crave a teacher’s coaching. In my opinion, the assistance of a teacher is generally advantageous to our study process yet not irreplaceable. In a word, the issue depends on the learner’s overall needs and level.
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Sentence: Finally, in my view, self-taught teaching is totally doable but only for the conscientious and perseverant ones whereas learning from teachers suits better for people who want to make rapid progress.
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