Sport today is turning into a business, with many companies involved and ever growing prize money for the sportsmen. Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?
With increasing involvement of media, advertisers and merchandisers, sports are becoming a money-oriented business where talented sportsmen receive ever higher amount of money prize. This trend has both positive and negative effects.
To begin with, sports organizers and athletes receive lots of money from media companies and sponsors by selling broadcasting rights and displaying companies’ logos at noticeable places. This involvement of media has spread the popularity of sports to millions of people outside the stadium. Media companies also benefit from this collaboration with more viewer...
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if the team underperform
if the teams under perform
Sentence: Therefore, if the team underperform or the sportsmen are involved in too many scandals, the chance of success of sponsors and media companies will be limited.
Error: underperform Suggestion: under perform
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