When visiting foreign countries some people think that it is advantageous to learn their cultures and traditions. How do you think people can learn other cultures and traditions?
With the fascinating development of world economy, more and more people are able to afford traveling abroad. The idea of learning another culture during traveling sounds tempting, yet people always find it is in fact very difficult to do so. In my opinion and based on my own experience, individuals can acquire the culture of their tourist destination through two ways. In the following essay, I will demonstrate them respectively.
The first way to learn another culture is to know something about the destination so that people can get prepared. It is not uncommon to find people complain after...
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