The 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrate to developed countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the moot question” whether immigrants has increased major problems in developed countries or not?” has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that migrating to industrialization country to enjoy a better lifestyle, the job opportunity, and economic stability is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that moving to developed countries plays a vital roll in economic growth of the society. To put into consideration, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that developed nations will have this opportunity to get familiar with other countries’ culture, identity, and language. Secondly, it can be argued that international students who are studying in overseas compel to spend a huge amount of money to cover their life and education that result in economic growth. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that those countries that are experiencing the negative population grows can compensate their counties for the professional workforce. A group of socialists, working at prestigious university conducted that immigrants share their attitudes and technologies with developed countries.
However, there is no doubt that migrating to developed areas provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that the majority of developed countries are worried about job opportunities that have been taken by immigrants and they are deprived of their rights, while they could have had a lucrative job. Moreover, developed nations think that in the future developed countries might struggle over-population that proceeds from over migration.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree with migrating to developed countries so that some useful actions must be taken into account this field. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce strict legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.(
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oped countries or not?' has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52941176471 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13212027539 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594427244582 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9832721115 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.384615385 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190008398691 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682240508376 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440444201751 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113883642862 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193014670856 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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