20. Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Other believe individuals can also do somethings to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People differ greatly in their views about the role of individuals in the job of addressing environmental problems. While some people believe
This task is beyond the capacity of individuals, I would contend that the
effort of each individual is indispensable.
It is argued that a person’s action is insignificant for large-scale environment-related issues. First and foremost, there are global-level environmental degradation problems such as global warming and climate change which a single person cannot combat. Not only does tackling these problems requires the very single country to reduce its greenhouse gases emission but it also needs the intergovernmental cooperation which must always play a central role in the resolution of such vast problems. Furthermore, environmental problems in different geographical regions are interconnected at the national and international level. A comprehensive solution with the joining efforts from people living in these areas, as a consequence, is much more significant than an individual’s resolution,
However, There are two compelling reasons as to why I am firmly convinced that one should not underestimate the importance of the efforts of individuals in preserving the environment. The primary reason is that individuals can be a catalyst for the legislation of environmental protection. A petition signed by 10,000 Vietnamese, for instance, has fostered the legislation process of a new law that makes cutting down trees lining city stress illegal. Moreover, if individuals purchase environmentally friendly products, such as electric vehicles or energy-efficient means of transport, this can be conducive to mitigating the air pollution level resulting from traffic fumes on the atmosphere.
To sum up, while it is believed that personal actions do not play a significant role in protecting the environment because a person cannot combat the environmental deterioration occurring in the whole world and various places, I argue that individuals’ efforts to preserve the environment when they prioritize environmental-friendly products and struggle to set up an environmental protection law
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86075949367 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.76583342196 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636075949367 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.2048794465 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.363636364 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249547562306 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946896017177 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551316436521 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123463002369 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759945111907 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.3 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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