It is believed that happiness is one of the most crucial factors for an individual’s life. This essay will discuss why joy is thought to be hard to explain and give out what is needed to become happy.
Although happiness is the most basic trait of a human being, it is also complicated to understand its full meaning. It is likely because a person’s happiness is structured and established by countless factors and events in his life. A person can achieve happiness just by eating his favorite dish, or by more ambitious achievements, such as winning a gold medal in a sports competition. Therefore, it is unsure what happiness really means and at which moment an individual feels joyful. Another point is joy is considered to work in a complex dynamic, yet in a strange way. Happiness can be achieved not only by positive thinking or behaviors, but also by random. The perfect example for this is people suffering from Bipolar disorder, they often feel elevated and delightful suddenly, without any reasons. It will likely to occur even if they are in a depressing state.
Alternatively, in order to achieve happiness, there are various factors needed to be taken into account. Probably being surrounded by close friends, acquaintances and family can bring joy to a person. Those people who we trust and care for can create a positive impact on our emotions and feelings. In addition, doing a helpful action can also make us feel happy. For instance, if we offer help or support to the poor or the handicapped people, we will feel as if we have done something righteous; thus, the amount of serotonin and dopamine in the brain will increase, which results in happiness.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that happiness is crucial for everyone’s life, yet no one has a capability to explain its potential definition. Regardless of that, happiness is still achievable by being with our loved ones and supporting other people who are in need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ents, such as winning a gold medal in a sports competition. Therefore, it is unsure wh...
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Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a strange way" with adverb for "strange"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...dered to work in a complex dynamic, yet in a strange way. Happiness can be achieved not only by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9335347432 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95408343163 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586102719033 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6435220873 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0588235294 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161092857449 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546060500138 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472175039201 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102667089352 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546400095014 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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