3. People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, most people think that if foreigners should adapt local customs and traditions when they come to the new location. I completely agree with this opinion.
Newcomers must face difficulties if they do not conform to the norms of social behavior in this country. Firstly, it will become impossible for them to blend into the new environment. For example, if an entrepreneur who come to new country cannot get on well with local traditions, he is bound to be failure in his business. But if he can follow the customs and traditions in host country, he can start his business. Moreover, if newcomers do not understand the traditions and customs in host country, they can get local people become angry. In Singapore, if newcomers throw trash in the street and make it dirty, local people will get to hot tempered.
There are many benefits of following local customs and traditions for foreigners when they come to a new country. One advantage is that local people will welcome when they feel newcomers are showing their respect for the local way of life. Meanwhile, if newcomers can follow the customs and traditions in the new country, they will quickly get on well with local people which make their life easy. Another benefit is the richness of experience which newbies will gain from enjoying local festivals or traditions. During festivals and national holidays, especially they will feel like they belong in their new country.
In conclusion, I would say that it is essential for new residents to following the traditions and habits of local people in host community in order to integrate fully society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9704797048 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66108719462 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483394833948 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2246578171 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2142857143 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295263680991 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120551876761 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859400396095 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207443446895 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377900097409 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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