Acid Rain
Nowadays where people have been more aware of environmental issues, acid rain has become a debating conversation between individuals. Not only is this essay going to clarify its causes and its effects, but also the solutions that should be taken is considered.
Environmental issues like Acid Rain has diverse causes which could range from natural causes such as increasing the amount of greenhouse gases by plants or the pollution that comes from volcanoes and also human activities that have been improving since Industrial revolution became more serious. Since then human-beings have expanded their activities which have included using much more fossil-fuel power that are used for our houses and vehicles. This leads to increasing the amount of pollution which have direct relation with the total amount of greenhouse gases that have been the most significant cause for this issue.
Those causes that had been mentioned, lead to have more Acid Rain. This issue has lots of effects on our planet and even on our lives. That has dangerous results on plants, it could wash the plants leaves’s covers and make them stop growing because Acid Rain could change the composition of soil and water so plants and even animals would not live as before. Additionally, not only has this issue had effects on our environment, but also it has destroyed stones and changed building and statue’s figure. In other words, it has diverse effects on our lives that could not be ignored.
In spite of all the harmful effects that Acid Rain has had, there are some ways that they could be reduced. This issue has several solutions that should be taken in order to save all the living things on the Earth. The First solution could be declining the amount of fossil-fuel power and use clean energies like wind or solar instead. Additionally, estimating the amount of pollution that comes from companies and cars and vehicles could be extremely helpful. Because in that case, the amount of pollution will be discovered and then they would be increased by doing some actions. Even one by one could make big changes like, instead of driving cars, people could use more public transportation or ride bikes in order to tackle this significant problem to be solved.
In conclusion, every environmental issues have both natural and human causes. For that reason, being aware of the its causes human-beings could tackle this issue by taking some solutions in order to have a better planet to live on.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ution that comes from volcanoes and also human activities that have been improvin...
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Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...causes. For that reason, being aware of the its causes human-beings could tackle this i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, in conclusion, such as, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02905569007 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55112985126 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476997578692 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3058501883 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.388888889 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156664232883 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684484175429 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115496508809 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105971798921 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715012166431 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ution that comes from volcanoes and also human activities that have been improvin...
^^
Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...causes. For that reason, being aware of the its causes human-beings could tackle this i...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, in conclusion, such as, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02905569007 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55112985126 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476997578692 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3058501883 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.388888889 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156664232883 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684484175429 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115496508809 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105971798921 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715012166431 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.