Ad and disad of live at home and far from home
It is true that some university students have a chance to live at home with their families, whereas others must live away from home since their universities are situated in different locations. Both these situations have their own advantages and disadvantages.
Living with families at home can bring to the university students both undeniable benefits and drawbacks. One of these advantages is the emotion which the students feel. They would find it more enjoyable and comfortable to come back home after many stressful hours of studying. This can help them to concentrate more on pursuing their studies without coping with the daily tasks such as: cooking, room-sharing and hygiene controlling. However, ling at home may generate some problems. If the students rely on their families too much, they are not able to gain a golden opportunity to develop some indispensable skills and broaden their network. This issue may deter them from reaching the outstanding success in the future.
Similarly, there are also the advantages and disadvantages in regard to living far from the student’s home. One of the most challenging difficulties which they have to face is the living costs. These expenses include accommodation cost, meals, bill of electricity and many other kinds of costs which make them suffer a financial burden. Besides, living in another places can also benefit the students. Dealing with many challenges by themself daily creates a extremely great chance for them to strengthen their real-life skills and independence. For instance, preparing meals everyday can enhance the students’s cooking skill and boost their creativity.
In conclusion, living at home with families or away from home could bring some potential advantages and negative issues for the students of universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: LING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'long'?
Suggestion: long
...aring and hygiene controlling. However, ling at home may generate some problems. If ...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ny challenges by themself daily creates a extremely great chance for them to stre...
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Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...pendence. For instance, preparing meals everyday can enhance the students's cooking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in regard to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4219858156 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93747401415 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0757208549 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287195415226 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103535398103 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124665991179 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221291553709 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728396664448 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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