the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city
Many people consider living in cities and they think that this is more advantageous while another group prefers living in the countryside as they find it as a better alternative. Living in a city and in an urban area, both has their advantages and disadvantages.
Fist, City life has brought about better health sevices. Bedsides public hospital, the number of private hospital is increasing in the big cities. That makes city dwellers easy to approach to medical. If you unfortunately have a health issue, you will have opportunities to use early diagnosis and treatments. Second, There are more opportunities for education and varied available courses in cities. In the countryside, It is difficult to find a university, while in the large metropolis such as Ha Noi, Ho Chi Minh are numerous. It is also easy to find English centers or piano courses
Besides many advantages, there are a lot of disadvantage. Firstly, Environmental degradation is an urgent problem with big citites. The main cause of that is industrialization and modernization. Growing up chemical, trash, smog etc which are emission from the industrial zone, vihicle, overcowding, make to pollute air, land and water environment. As a result, inhabitant's health can be effected. Secondly, city dwellers face on traffic congestion, due to people migrate from the countryside to metropolis, so the population is growing up. That is the main cause of inrease in vihicle, so city denizens waste time on moving in the peak time. And That also is responsible for mental illness.
In conclution, living in a big city has both benifits and drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14828897338 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13865832879 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8788818286 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6470588235 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249638823235 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718351966032 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108788478815 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185955450487 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139462212115 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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