In this fast-paced society, many cities are becoming more and more developing. Therefore, living in the city is a controversial issue. This clearly has many benefits, but there are some drawbacks too. I will consider both sides of the argument and give my own opinion.
To begin with, city life is intriguing and entertaining. We can take part in many engaging activities such as playing sports, hanging out with friends, going to the cinema, the shopping mall and joining clubs and so on. Besides that, there are more job opportunities for the young generation and unemployed people because of its significant development. There are many high-paid jobs, which are very popular and beneficial for your life for instance are doctor, teacher, chef, singer, fashional designer. Furthermore, urban children are able to have a wonderful fundamental education. For example, they have conditions to be educated in high-quality international schools or famed English centers.
On the other hand, city life also has some disadvantages. The main one is pollution. We may suffer from air, noise pollution as well as exhaust fumes from vehicles, factories, and so forth. In addition, it also has many bad traffic problems, which will affect you. Congestion and traffic accidents are good cases in point. Another negative aspect is the social evils such as property crime, murder, kidnapping and other crimes.
In conclusion, from my perspective; we should study and earn money in the city when we are young and move to the countryside when we are older and wealthy enough.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18972332016 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86016382607 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660079051383 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8643894996 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2352941176 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102036350521 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378634676583 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743424553504 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643812814142 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472865935485 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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