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the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community
The place of living determines the number of people someone knows in his or her area. In the past, most people lived in an area whose small community that made them easy to know each other has both strength and weakness. In this essay, I will show those both views.
Firstly, the limited number of population which led the people to know each other well made them easy to get assistance when they got a problem or needed something. This point became the factor why the people there had a very high social responsibility.
Secondly, the limitation of their number made them unwilling to do a crim...
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most people lived in an area whose small community that made them easy to know each other has both strength and weakness.
most people lived in an area where small community made them easy to know each other. and it has both strength and weakness.
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