advantages and disadvantages of the use of organic foods
Using organic food has grown significantly over recent years. Although it has important advantages, there are some problems as a barrier to spreading out completely.
The two main advantages of organic food are producing more healthy food and environmental protection.
Firstly, there is no doubt that removing chemical fertilizers and pesticides leads to producing food of high quality. Since there is a strong correlation between healthier meals and the reduction of physical disease, lifestyles are changed toward the application of organic foods. For instance, digestion problems provoke more people to omit conventional food from daily diets.
The second main advantage is related to environmental aspects. Traditional agriculture relies on the consumption of different types of hazardous chemical-based fertilizers and pesticides, which might be to raise the level of soil and water resources pollution. Hence, it will have serious repercussions on both the quality of crops and soil grade in the future. Moreover, it can change the ecosystem by killing all of the insects that are necessary to do pollination. For instance, about two hundred years ago, one of the Chinese kings ordered to eliminate all insects in the gardens of the city to protect the crops from affection. As an unpredicted result, the trend of pollination has been stopped and people were forced to do it themselves by hand.
However, agriculture methods that aim to develop organic foods also have some disadvantages. Two major of them are being more costly and unavailability in comparison with commercial methods.
It seems that modern agriculture with the purpose of organic food production will also be considerably expensive because of using sophisticated fertilizers and other required additives that certainly are higher priced rather than usual chemical materials.
As the last point, it is also true that the main agriculture process is still based on the traditional procedure which led to some difficulties to have appropriate organic foods everywhere you need. For example, it would be unimaginable to find organic foods in the majority of supermarkets or shops.
In conclusion, I would not wish to underestimate the potential of organic foods as a substituent for current options; But the financial and accessibility play as obstacles. From my point of view, organic foods, in spite of being healthier and ecologically friendly, the disadvantages are outweighed the positive effects.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... it can change the ecosystem by killing all of the insects that are necessary to do pollin...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49738219895 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16182687713 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575916230366 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.336540037 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.526315789 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351067046181 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956237034157 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100272837789 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166964277603 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854619763602 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... it can change the ecosystem by killing all of the insects that are necessary to do pollin...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49738219895 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16182687713 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575916230366 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.336540037 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.526315789 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351067046181 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956237034157 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100272837789 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166964277603 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854619763602 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.