It is true that these day social media is a hotly issue that many people controversy in the world. While a number of people especially old people believe that using social nets is wasting of time, I would argue that social nets is very useful for our life.
On the one hand, I think social network enable our life more comfortable. Firstly, social nets is a big library that everyone can update the news, read a lot of information with only a small phone. For instant, instead of up to one's ears in reading book to find the information about something, people only need to type the keyword on their social media and the other people will give your the best answers that they know. Secondly, people can easily contact with everybody at anytime and anywhere you want. Instead of sending letter and wait one month for respond, people can contact and talking to other for all day, not only save the money but also it is faster and more comfortable.
On the other hand, I think that nowadays young people using social networks to much that affect to much for their work. Firstly, people can be easily distract from their work because they spend their focus mainly for their phone instead of their work. Many people can stop their work when they receive a message from someone or they got some notification from their social network. Secondly, there are many people who are addicted to social nets that they can not live without it, it is very bad for their health and their live. Using most of free time to chatting or surfing social network can make their life more passive and their body will become stagnant.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that using social nets can make our life more comfortable and easier. However, people should understand the harmful of spending most of their time for using social networking and adjust the time that fit for their time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
It is true that these day social media is a hotly issue that many...
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Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('hotly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('issue') instead of another adjective.
... is true that these day social media is a hotly issue that many people controversy in the wor...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ll phone. For instant, instead of up to ones ears in reading book to find the inform...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...days young people using social networks to much that affect to much for their work...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ing social networks to much that affect to much for their work. Firstly, people ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67159763314 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15949783567 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502958579882 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8868235974 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200568037202 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095681623643 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856965545653 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172830091626 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837162856959 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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