advantages of internet
The internet plays an important role in our modern life. However, every coin has two sides and we can find out pros and cons of the internet by my following provement.
The internet is a breakthrough in developing technology. it brings us wonderful advantages. First, education is more and more improved due to appearance of the internet. students can learn and look for basic knowledge online without spending too much time in the libarary. this leads to the fact that it is very convenient for both teachers and students to broaden their perception. Second, the internet shorten the distance of people even though they are very far from each other. Skype or Yahoo are good ways for them to contact and have fun. it is true to say that distance is not a big problem in such a developing technology world. Third, the internet makes everything easier and faster. For example, we can send or receive documentary through email for a short time wwhile 10 years ago, we need to wait foe 3 or 4 days to send to a far distence.
On the other hand, the internet also has drawbacks. people especially teenager are easily involved in computer games. they take so much time to sit in front of the screen to play games. this doesn't only affect to their health but it also decrease the amount of money which their parents earn by hard works. they can't understand that money doesn't grow on tree. Moreover, the internet prevents them from taking part in outdoor activities beacause of the internet's attraction. this will slowdown socal skills and cause their inconfidence .
In a word, the inetrnet is one of the most wonderful inventions in th
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hat money doesnt grow on tree. Moreover, the internet prevents them from taking p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, third, while, for example, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77894736842 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57428392909 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624561403509 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2299106846 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204359085684 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668787810334 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086668385383 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110244061258 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654640650944 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.