With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill may be made as fourth skill to be added to the list.
To what extent do you agree?
When young people undergo education, they would tend to learn more skills, which would help them to grab opportunities upon graduation. In recent days, computer skills are considered necessary for those along with other subjects like maths, reading, and writing. In my opinion, I agree with the fact that computer skill is also important while perusing education.
Traditionally primary education consisted of maths, reading, and writing. Due to the advancement in technology and science, many new subjects such as computer have been given much importance. The advancement in computers has brought new trends like Artificial Intelligence, which is used in creating robots and other machines that is capable of processing faster and lesser time when compared with humans. For example, many household robots are available in the market that could perform basic activities such as cleaning, security maintenance and so on.
On the other hand, many programming languages such as C, C++, and Java have evolved since the introduction of the computer. Programming language skills add more value to one’s resume in terms of finding better employment. Nowadays, many IT companies rely on the latest technologies and innovation for generating more capital gains and are will to pay more to those who have particular skill sets. For example, Citibank recruits candidates who have skills set of python and Oracle as it would be useful for machine interface technologies and could reduce complexity.
In conclusion, computer skills are necessary and should be added as a part of fundamental education because it could provide with the right skill set for jobs and other demands. I think school and colleges should implement this practice thus could help students to update their knowledge and could also lead to new innovations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
... reading, and writing. In my opinion, I agree with the fact that computer skill is also important while ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81828593051 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5194282411 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177268766174 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629101756018 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067641759665 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110972383299 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052487676059 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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