Advertisements on toys and fast foods lure children most. Do you think it has negative effect on children as well as family?
It is true that, many kinds of ads about toys and fast foods makes an allure in children to the core. However, in my reckon, which makes a detrimental effect not only in children but also whole family. Because, excessive tendency to take junk foods and unnecessary play items may lead to health problems, addiction, and lack of inter personal relationship.
To begin with, make use of advertisement may influence in preference of food among children. In brief, irrespective of health benefits they often tend to buy fast food and adorer of such unhealthy food items. Certain promotional ads has gimmick explanations and deception of adulterating substance quality by the over exposure of subliminal works. For instance, extra added colors and additives may have the tendency to mesmerize the product and may diminish the health value to some extent. Consequently, such items may affect on body, mind in terms of juvenile diabetes, obesity and so on. Secondly, certain toys ads have proclivity to buy and seem to use would adversely affect on children mind and thinking capacity. Promotion of toys with spider men or super men devoid of the self power of pupils and may lead to misunderstanding the inborn talent and like to imitate such character eventually.
Similarly, some kind of ads make pernicious effect on whole family in terms of health and financial point of view. In brief, as by addiction of fast food in children many families opt to buy for the interest of children or some how to make calm to the child. Parents also urge to buy such things intentionally by the easiness of making food in fast growing life style and modernization. Such attitude deliberately affect in terms of health problems or in turn devoid of health agenda of overall family members. Likewise, emerging advertisements of many toys would have proclivity of children to capture without considering the value or prize. Such behaviour may displace the financial situation of family or unlikely, parents peace by the over conscious of their children interest used to be. Furthermore, certain type of toys would mitigate the inter personal relation ship in communication or emotions. For example, costly play items promoted by student anchor or film star make an ordinary child to be like little star or the parents of them.
To conclude, advertisement are inevitable for promotion of any items. Although, by the virtue of such ads make detrimental effect on behavior, attitude on food items and financial and psychological standard of parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in brief, kind of, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 41.998997996 200% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2119.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87781951885 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507211538462 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0071989635 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.95 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24401794594 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805074084785 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700415318883 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156572185336 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502124796573 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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