In modern days people are heavily influenced by other cultures. Is this cultural invasion a positive development or a negative development?
It is true that, people are prone to get influence by the various cultures recently. Owing to the fact that, there were many merits and demerits in peoples believes and customs. However, in this essay explain about the disadvantageous of cultural attacks in order to the heritage, primitive traditions, and believes.
To begin with, cultural invasion would be pop across than the previous years by the cause of globalization and amalgamation of people around the world. such kind of factors able to give chance for the people to mingle with each other absorb certain cultures and belief as themselves. Since, such burgeoning factors unknowingly deleterious to the home culture and make confusion among members to the right and wrong of their own real system. Moreover, diminish the ancient belief and trends, proclivity to change the actuality, intent to mix up with other culture and to develop apparently new types of traditions would be the after effect of cultural attacks. For instance, many pristine belief went mitigate and attributed western culture in local traditional celebration in India was one of the controversy in recent days.
Likewise, most of the cultural arts and programs stand in a dangerous zone by the over influence of foreign traditional impacts. In other words, ancient national arts like dance, music and lexical events went in significantly crucial stage in order to the invasion. Many people try to change the formal strategy of arts and folks, then, try to mix with other cultures would have pernicious impacts on the real arts. Thereby minimizing the beauty of such things and inability to accept the innovative one as the original theme. For instance, in India, some sort of musical albums and dance theme were assimilated to western cultures and arts and such events would make irritation to the many activist and national culture.
To sum up, cultural invasion has been indispensable in modern world. Nevertheless, excessive attack of other cultures would make shrinking of own cultural values, believes, and predominantly arts and folks to the core. Since, such cultural invasion seems to be contradict to the people and nation as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, for instance, kind of, sort of, in other words, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19886363636 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73053190675 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9302260461 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236769832517 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802295943873 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477360701716 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150176880639 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416916747531 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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