Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There exist endless of how advertising play an important role for the sellers. Especially for the large advertising where produce a large number of occupation for the employees. I strongly agree that pr inspire buyers to purchase in number of gear than standard products.
First and foremost the reason why sellers select advertise to vend their items. This is because the images of advertising product appear in the social media. As a result consumer will know the items throw pr campaign such as appeared on television advertise, on newspaper,...This is simply to see that there are a great number of convenient that will bring for them. Not only trader will sail the good faster, more money to enter their budget but also they will have a huge loyalty customer if their products have positive respond. Unless their goods are bad quality, they will earn the conflict respond.In addition a factor to consider is that if trader want to have advertising campaign, they will have a various number of options in advertising company that suggest. Even if they will not use advertising from company where product a massive choice to sellers make a consider, they can use internet to spread out to market their brand easier. Not only it is free but also a great number of consumer keen on purchase items in advertise on the internet. They claim that whether pr campaign on the word wide web will have a great of good offer or they do not have to wait for purchase to checkout whereas they just enjoy that moments to relax and wait the delivery.
To conclude, I believe advertising bring a large number of opportunity for the sellers because there has a great benefits for them. In the future it is predicted that it will be a trend in the forthcoming
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...for the large advertising where produce a large number of occupation for the employees. I strongl...
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Message: The proper name in singular (pr) must be used with a third-person verb: 'campaigns'.
Suggestion: campaigns
...t consumer will know the items throw pr campaign such as appeared on television advertis...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ed on television advertise, on newspaper,...This is simply to see that there are a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: In
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...advertising from company where product a massive choice to sellers make a conside...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...o conclude, I believe advertising bring a large number of opportunity for the sellers because the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, whereas, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74671052632 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60023895863 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513157894737 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4539923693 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917500333846 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398698021704 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264862464108 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620022936409 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243172951421 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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