After past few decades , loads of changes have happened for communicational paths .someones are calling into question that state-of-the-art communication tools taking a heavy toll on social life standards and our relationships . I will point out that why up-to-the-minute technology might inflict on communication ;however ,remedies so as to address this issue will be discussed .
it goes without saying that there are a wide-range of underling reasons why advanced-technologies ,which nowadays become a way of life can be harmful for our contact and relevance . To begin with, one of the chief causes is folk ,especially ,young generation fail to make a balance between real life and virtue apace , in fact ,they can easily seethed in the internet for several times in succession as everywhere as possible . this tendency ,moreover, possesses dir consequences which isolate them form rest of the society ,thus they have not strong desire to spend a great deal of time with their lover one even. If going on this bad habit to just establish relationship via viral space , probably sooner or later they will have to face bigger crisis ranging from stress-related diseases to weak will power, which might have profound impact on their interpersonal relationships .
To come straight to the point ,if we want to take the issue into our strides , parents will playing a vital role in other to grab their family members’ attentions so as to being sociable. for instance, those who face parental laxity or those grow up under shadow of the bomb have not adequate freedom to go outdoor and make a friend that it trigger to the individuals turn their attention to online-based communication . In addition it is a hight time that authorities made a aware not only those that being more vulnerable for a plenty of difficulties ,which stemming from this habit , but also close ones entail to stay alert if they want to make a help ;however it is perennial problem.
To sum up, considering the points above-mentioned, the far most rational conclusion to be drawn is that I have-deeply held belief that although technology has had prerogatives for communication , handicaps are more to a couple of reasons . and whether close ones or government should join their hand to prevalent of potential drawbacks for such issues .
After past few decades , loads of changes have happened for communicational paths .someones are calling into question that state-of-the-art communication tools taking a heavy toll on social life standards and our relationships . I will point out that why up-to-the-minute technology might inflict on communication ;however ,remedies so as to address this issue will be discussed .
it goes without saying that there are a wide-range of underling reasons why advanced-technologies ,which nowadays become a way of life can be harmful for our contact and relevance . To begin with, one of the chief causes is folk ,especially ,young generation fail to make a balance between real life and virtue apace , in fact ,they can easily seethed in the internet for several times in succession as everywhere as possible . this tendency ,moreover, possesses dir consequences which isolate them form rest of the society ,thus they have not strong desire to spend a great deal of time with their lover one even. If going on this bad habit to just establish relationship via viral space , probably sooner or later they will have to face bigger crisis ranging from stress-related diseases to weak will power, which might have profound impact on their interpersonal relationships .
To come straight to the point ,if we want to take the issue into our strides , parents will playing a vital role in other to grab their family members’ attentions so as to being sociable. for instance, those who face parental laxity or those grow up under shadow of the bomb have not adequate freedom to go outdoor and make a friend that it trigger to the individuals turn their attention to online-based communication . In addition it is a hight time that authorities made a aware not only those that being more vulnerable for a plenty of difficulties ,which stemming from this habit , but also close ones entail to stay alert if they want to make a help ;however it is perennial problem.
To sum up, considering the points above-mentioned, the far most rational conclusion to be drawn is that I have-deeply held belief that although technology has had prerogatives for communication , handicaps are more to a couple of reasons . and whether close ones or government should join their hand to prevalent of potential drawbacks for such issues .
- Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to succeed at college or university؟Tutors in university.The encouragement from family and friends.High-quality education from high school. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 90
- In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. 76
- Imagine that you plan to donate money to charity to help people in need. If you could give money to only one type of charitable organization, which one of the following would you choose and why? - An organization that provides food and housing to people 76
- Many schools do not allow students to take their laptop computers into the classroom. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having laptop computers in the classroom? Use specific details and examples to support your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, for instance, in addition, in fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13262599469 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14567192545 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628647214854 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7859553695 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.909090909 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2727272727 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360094773505 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141486885063 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.246193555935 0.0667982634062 369% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259324011949 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.284582061074 0.056905535591 500% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.