Life today is easier and more comfortable that it was when your grandparents were children.
Determining the quality of life is very hard, because it heavily depends on what factors one chooses. Nonetheless, there are measures that can give us an idea of whether or not we have been moving forward in terms of amenities of everyday life such as educational facilities, life expectancy, and infantile mortality the most essential ones of which, in the view of yours truly, are public access to medical facilities and finding a job. I think that life today is much easier and cozier than it used to be for our grandparents. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate my reasons.
First, nowadays access to medical facilities is easier than ever. The main reason for the population boom of a few decades ago was the improvement of medical science which shows the importance of the impact of health related issues on the quality of humans' life. Having access to hospitals is taken for granted nowadays and seems axiomatic for every town and village to have one. However, forty or fifty years ago, most districts- municipality areas consisting of a few towns and villages- shared a single hospital. Many times, a poor child or woman had to shuttle kilometers to a neighboring town's hospital only to find that their doctors could not diagnose their illness, and they had to travel to an even farther hospital. But nowadays, almost everyone can get to a hospital within minutes. And it is not just the high number of hospitals, but services like emergency services where you call a number with your phone and an ambulance will come and get you. Had someone time-traveled from fifty years ago to this point in time, it would be considered a miracle to dial some things on your phone and then sit waiting for help to come in less than ten minutes.
Second, finding a job and being financially independent is by far easier than it used to be in old times. When our grandparents were youngsters, social classes were important, and not everyone could have any job they wanted. And even if they could, it was extremely laborious to leave the family job and pursue another profession. But now, with the advent of the Internet and other technologies, learning has become much simpler. Any science or knowledge that one can imagine, is a few clicks away from them. Take yours truly for instance, who studied electrical engineering most of my academic life, but overnight, got interested in computer science. I found educational material readily and started studying, which resulted in a rapid progress in my new field. Ten years ago this would have been impossible, let alone fifty years ago.
It is easy to conclude that life is much simpler these days. With great knowledge comes great responsibilities, but I think upsides of these ramifications outweigh their downsides.
By: Mansour_za Shared on: Grammar Nazi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...re measures that can give us an idea of whether or not we have been moving forward in terms of...
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Line 2, column 593, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'towns'' or 'town's'?
Suggestion: towns'; town's
... to shuttle kilometers to a neighboring towns hospital only to find that their doctor...
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Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'rapid progress'.
Suggestion: rapid progress
...and started studying, which resulted in a rapid progress in my new field. Ten years ago this wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, then, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2336.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89727463312 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73581291092 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574423480084 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 750.6 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4208164175 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.565217391 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7391304348 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73913043478 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153766381406 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372747385888 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047337715965 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719871284345 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550114414344 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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