Travel by air is becoming increasingly common in modern society, as more people prefer to undertake the long-distance journey by air. Therefore, I believe that air travel benefits people as a whole, both the rich and the poor.
People may argue that only rich people can afford travelling by air due to its high cost This is because in the past travelling by air is relatively more expensive than by bus or by train, which makes it unaffordable to some people. However, this problem becomes insignificant nowadays, because budget airlines frequently offer tickets with low price. It is not difficult nowadays to find budget plane tickets through various travel applications, such as Booking, Ctrip and Qunar. For example, one traveller can easily book a round-trip ticket between Beijing and Los Angeles of around 6,000 Yuan from Ctrip, while the full price could be as high as 15,000 Yuan.
Air travel can also benefit people by providing more job opportunities and allowing them to travel to different places. People can gain more choices of where to work, and to be more likely to find their dream lifestyles, because of affordable plane tickets and available flights. For example, an increasing number of graduates choose to apply for work holiday visa to travel around the world while supporting themselves by working part-time in the country they are visiting. The particular experience can not only significantly broaden their horizons and gain up-to-date knowledge about different cultures, but also equip them with a wide variety of practical skills and life experiences. This would without a doubt improve their ability to be independent and help them draft their career paths.
In conclusion, while air travel was only affordable to the rich, people with the middle-class background are also able to travel by air in the present, thanks to the emergence of budget airlines. In the future, this trend will continue and bring more benefits to the public.
- Nowadays cultures of different countries are becoming more similar than they used to be.What are the reason? Is it a positive or a negative development? Give your own opinion and examples. 89
- Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects they are best at or they are most interested in. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world Ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel To what extent do you agree or disagree 52
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to travel'.
Suggestion: to travel
... argue that only rich people can afford travelling by air due to its high cost This is bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15264797508 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72131530905 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582554517134 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.180253617 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.230769231 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347144219439 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132440122204 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110499261338 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239748457165 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352048766626 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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