Some people believe that parents have a great influence on children’s growth, but others think that influence from the outside plays a more important role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
For decades, there has been growing concern about the next generation’s healthy development. Although we cannot ignore the influence of the outside environment, I believe, parents take the leading role in children’s growth and development.
Parenting quality plays a fundamental and pivotal role in children’s cognitive development and psychological and emotional health. In early childhood, children acquire knowledge and abilities by imitating their parents. During this period, consciously or unconsciously, parents will impart their moral values and outlook on life to the next generation, which will insert considerable influence on children’s future. Also, the pattern and quality of children’s relationships in the future are replicas of the childhood parent-child relationship. Therefore, a child with a close relationship with parents is more likely to establish good social relationships and find happiness.
On the other hand, an individual’s social environment, including social relationships can have a profound impact on a child’s healthy development and future achievements. Children living in social environments characterized by residential stability are less likely to be absent from school and perform better academically than those who do not. Also, being unmatured and unmatured, children are likely to learn from their social environment, for example by mimicking (or challenging) their peers, and thus what they see in their day to day environment is likely to influence their future behaviour. However, a child’s social environment is largely determined by where their parents live and send them to school. It is parents who have the option.
In conclusion, parenting, other than social environment, is the essential factor in children’s development and future shaping
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04961832061 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58910362366 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1123047628 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.923076923 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216374356882 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872432125718 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055431327221 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138959129519 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389723177545 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.81 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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