People,thesedays,prefer distinguish mods of transports for traveling purposes, all have their own ticket prices. Many airline orgnaization have decreased their ticket rates in number of nations. I,indeed, reckon that it has more advantageous of this phenomena that will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs
To reduce the ticket fares of aeroplanes have plethora of benefits.The primary one is that a majority of people who had no ability to purchase a huge amount of ticket of it , now they can travel by planes. At the same time, out of the poverty line, they can migrate into another country for doing job,and earn a telephone figure salary. For instance, a survey was conducted by international news that owing to reduce in airline tickets, 90% travellers are using this mod for traveling purposes as it has become affordable method. Hence, the number of unemployed people are reducing.
Another advantage is that people can travel all around the world within few time period as planes are the most fastest mod of transport. To illustrate, they can explore the culture and traditional of others. Besides it, having a less price of ticket, they can return at home in night after working hours rather than residing there for all life in other country. For example, my uncle is doing job in singapore , is a daily commuter of airline services, Hence, the liaison between people and their native country would not be reduced.
In conclusion, because of having a relaxation in airline ticket price, the majority of people are having benefits from it by exploring the world and doing job in other countries.
- Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care this was not so in the past wat may be the root cause of this behaviour Discuss the reason and possible 86
- Airline Companies in many countries have reduced the cost of tickets Discuss whether this is positive or negative developments Give some examples based on your own experience 78
- Airline Companies in many countries have reduced the cost of tickets Discuss whether this is positive or negative developments Give some examples based on your own experience 78
- Society is based on rules and laws It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thesedays
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Suggestion: , indeed
...eir ticket rates in number of nations. I,indeed, reckon that it has more advantageous o...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...reckon that it has more advantageous of this phenomena that will be discussed in the...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...of aeroplanes have plethora of benefits.The primary one is that a majority of peopl...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o purchase a huge amount of ticket of it , now they can travel by planes. At the s...
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Suggestion: , and
...grate into another country for doing job,and earn a telephone figure salary. For ins...
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Message: Use only 'fastest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: fastest
...ithin few time period as planes are the most fastest mod of transport. To illustrate, they c...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the fastest'.
Suggestion: most the fastest
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Suggestion:
...urn at home in night after working hours rather than residing there for all life ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mple, my uncle is doing job in singapore , is a daily commuter of airline services...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07518796992 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87421960507 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0329919855 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.727272727 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159741589317 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620827814572 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526580735922 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111727786864 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465605810628 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.