All Inventions and discoveries like the discovery on fireand lives so much so that people can no longer without them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Science have already its research and inventions. in this blue planet because of the advanced technology people cannot live without this. i firmly accord with the given sytement which i shall discuss in the following paragraph.
In regard to my opinion, the prominent point is that in this fast pace the advancement in technology has proved that the people are habtiluate toward the machinary products as compared to ancient times. For instance, in delhi most people prefer to travel in to the metrpolian cities which help them to active as their final destination.
further strenghting the same, industrial revoulation is the fastest growing industry and has developed many technology issues which benefit to every indvidual. many researcher has proven this with their practical experiment and applied in real basis, with which there is a vast difference if compared to the earlier days. when these facilties were not available as now . for example the developed countries like japan are much consumed toward. the technology advanced such as reached to the other planent and experimenting.
To sum up, day by day there is an advancement in the technology which has been set up in people's life and made the life easier and cpmparatable with their optimum utilisation of resources in technology, industries and transportation purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, such as, in regard to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89152293481 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638497652582 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2488488676 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.272727273 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0598415537834 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232091285127 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315489032236 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0381834119855 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172310100134 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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