Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this current scenario, many people prefer to stay apart from their families these day as compared to earlier professional life process them to get integrated in a separate way. according to me, it is the positive change because they are dependent on themselves. this essay will discuss about the same statement in the imminent paragraphs.
To begin, with people used to live with their parents in by gone era but in today professional's life seeks their first priority to their career because they want to earn remuneration which is quite possible in the developed nations such as America,Australia and Canada would like to migrate these for their qualifies jobs and also for their higher studies which is turn can help them be develop their desired objective.
Moving further, people are so much concerned on themselves which makes them strong enough to tackle any problem
they have less time to spend and no time to communication. some how they also went a privacy from their family for instance most of the people have materialistic thinking and want to enjoy luxurious life.
In a nutshell, staying alone is considered to be beneficial as one can fully concertante in their work and there will be no distraction with which their desired goal to make their career better and a bright future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
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Message: Consider replacing "in a separate way" with adverb for "separate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nal life process them to get integrated in a separate way. according to me, it is the positive ch...
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Suggestion: According
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: in my opinion; I think
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Suggestion: This
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professionals'' or 'professional's'?
Suggestion: professionals'; professional's
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Suggestion: somehow
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...areer better and a bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, apart from, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03196347032 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72161441143 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.854851007 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.428571429 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0762672411351 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444447788483 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402800581454 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0491220344228 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414402768503 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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