All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause?How can we overcome the problems of poverty?
It is a proven fact that the gap between wealthy and low-income families is widening whole across the globe. As a result, education has become inaccessible to the poor as well as an increase in crime rates. However, it can be tackled by imposing a high percentage of tax on wealthy people and by introducing the government welfare schemes for needy people.
One of the main problems caused by the unequal distribution of wealth is that education has become inaccessible to the poor. Nowadays, quality education has become very expensive. For instance, A-class schools and colleges are incredibly costly and not within the reach of poor people. Due to this, these people are not able to compete for high paying jobs, and it becomes a fundamental disadvantage for them. Furthermore, another critical issue is the increase in crime rates. As marginalized groups most often do not make enough money to meet their basic needs, they resort to atrocious acts such as burglary and theft.
To solve the grave problems caused by poverty, the government should help the needy people to improve their standard of living by offering them food, health care, and education for free or at concessional rates. Moreover, High rates of taxes ought to be imposed by the tax authorities on the high-income groups so that collected money can be spent on the welfare schemes of the poor for reducing the gap between rich and the poor. For instance, Tax authorities have made slabs for tax rates means a significant percentage for the high-income group and low proportion for the low-income group.
In conclusion, it is imperative to bridge the gap between the rich and the poor for consistent growth as well as development. Efforts applied in this direction will have long-term benefits that improve the global ranking of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0099009901 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76843203394 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528052805281 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.084331411 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166145869752 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064731540618 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588543348132 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105778907617 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409226639609 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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