All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subject is better for a children’s future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is no denying that all parents want good things for their children in order to live comfort life. It is often argued that school is the best place for children to learn skills whilst other disagree and think that variety of subjects too is helpful for children future. This essay agrees that it is the responsibility of school to help children for enhancing their capabilities and to sharpen their mind conceptually. This essay will discuss both point of view.
It is clear that after home academic institution is the sector where children study each and every things that are important in their daily life as well as in future. Moreover, it also help student to know about actual meaning of struggle and life in order to sustain in the competitive world. Similarly, educational institution too help children to cope with difficult situation and develop their own identity in crowd. It is therefore agreed that school is the backbone for the student to develop their personality and to achieve goals effectively. For example, this is most evident in my country that nowadays maximum number of children are able to become unique and knowledgeable just because of the new skills teaches by schools.
However, many disagrees and think that apart from school; variety of subject helps in gaining more knowledge about subjective field. It helps children to develop intellectual personality along with them. Not only this, multiple subject improve student creative and innovative level and control over the performance through developing career effectively. Despite this, career development is still possible with guideline and inspiration rather than focus on multiple course of content. For instance, according to research of 2015 conducted by “Tribhuwan University” education board of Nepal showed that huge number of children are skilled since from their schooling and they are better performer in comparison to others.
In conclusion, schools are the responsible towards student success and growth whereas variety of subject too help to broaden mind having more talents and ideas. At last, I personally believe that schools are more relevant to acquired knowledge for every students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76704890654 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566091954023 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9617893327 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358506134946 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11496855571 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970465376458 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219324373082 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127067292347 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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