At present, all parents enroll their child in schools for a bright future. Regarding this, a few folks think variety of subjects should be taught in schools, other people opine practical skills are better option. Moreover, i believe latter view is more vital than anything else for secure career and overall develoment.
The scope of work opportunities is much secure for experenced person rather than bookworms. In other words , students can get more benefits with practical skills, which helps them to enhance their job performance, even if they are part- time workers. Furthermore, with personalisation and particular field skills also help businesses to enhance productivity. For instance, it is commonly seen that, these abitities have been made pupils more innovative and creative. Thus, overall personality development with practical based learning is in favour of person as well as organisations.
Whilst, better reading and writing skills can only be possible through theoritical education, means by adding extra subjects. Eventhough , a few pupils feel books learning boring, there is still some chance of settlement based on it. Additionally, variety of subjects enhance child's genernal knowledge as well as good writer, because as much as students will learn , the better they grind their personality. For instance , health related subjects can be advantageous for every stream student. Moreover , there are still some companies demanding such fresher for making report or conducting surveys.
As far as my prospective, effectiveness of experimental abilities allow unlimited opportunities for students , there is more suruggle in case of lacking it.
In conclusion, multiple subjects might be helpful in student's future growth, however in case of skillful person the door of work choices are open.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61454545455 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96309455337 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665454545455 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9065105904 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208117167091 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681748319907 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537749169149 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109502468745 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727584649311 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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