Social media apps are in widely usage among folks for communication and to get news updates in these days . Moreover, i believe these advancements provide convinent, fast and end- to- end connection with other numerious perks, having a little limitations.
Every information and daily happenings updates are now under the palm of public due to th grace of social media . By just pushing a smartphone's button , all over the world news flashed on screen which made world as a global village. Furthermore, secured e-communication now has reduced the relationship gaps by providing worldwide connectivity. Moreover, free video calls feel like one is sitting in front of another actual person. Hence, globally reach with social media is pocket friendly as well as easy to accessable.
Whilst, sometimes fake information available on social media affects people sentiments due to no surity of genuineness. Sometimes results of such fake news generates voilance and harm public properity. Recently, a famous politician, Bhagwant maan's twitter account was hacked and hacker used it to abuse public, this whole scene later turn into controversy. However, it rarely happens and now social media apps are providing the facility of two-step verification to prevent such issues.
Eventhough , a little intruptions arises on social media, can be preventable by high secuity. In my opinion, mosty information on internet is geniune without any froud.
In conclusion, inevitable role of social networking for receiving updated news and communication is in the favours of public to get worldwide connectivity.
- The Growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in a effort to deal withthe health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the 84
- All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subject is better for a children’s future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 84
- People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Nowadays people use social media to keep in touch with others and be aware of news. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5081300813 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04191781612 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678861788618 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.681030083 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199738460445 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615640669719 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426491661272 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100657723621 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228058636988 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.