The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
The given line graph illustrate the number of passengers using underground station in London.
Over the span of 16 hours, more passenger used the underground station during 8 A.M. in the morning and 6 P.M. in the evening.
As a matter of fact, at 6 am only 100 passengers used the underground station in London and this trend has then soared and reached up to a peak at 8 o’clock. Similarly, after reaching a peak in the following period it has fallen back to just under 200 passenger using underground transportation at 10 am. There was a gradual increased on these trend up to 2 pm where about 200 people in an average uses the underground station and it had again slip back to the figure of 6 am by 4 pm. Moreover, the proportion of using similar station then rocketed and reached just under 400 at 6 pm and finally stabilized at about 150 passenger using underground station in London, though there was a dramatic fall was noticed in between the period in the question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[2]
Message: Use simply 'A.M.'
Suggestion: A.M.
...r used the underground station during 8 A.M. in the morning and 6 P.M. in the evening. As a matte...
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Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: PM_IN_THE_EVENING[3]
Message: Use simply 'P.M.'
Suggestion: P.M.
...tion during 8 A.M. in the morning and 6 P.M. in the evening. As a matter of fact, at 6 am only 10...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'passenger' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'passengers'.
Suggestion: passengers
...od it has fallen back to just under 200 passenger using underground transportation at 10 ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'slipped'.
Suggestion: slipped
...he underground station and it had again slip back to the figure of 6 am by 4 pm. Mor...
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Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'passenger' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'passengers'.
Suggestion: passengers
... pm and finally stabilized at about 150 passenger using underground station in London, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, moreover, similarly, so, then, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58522727273 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81386560052 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.55812004 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347324660736 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222890379296 0.103423049105 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161859119015 0.0843802449381 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327804194614 0.15604864568 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171249474395 0.0819641961636 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.