alternative sources are more beneficial than fossil fuels.
to what extend agree or disagree?
Fossil fuels known as one of the most important resources of energy in worldwide. Beside this, in recent decades, use of other sources e.g: wind, solar and even nuclear energy increase strictly in many countries. I strongly believe that using of these sources have many advantages for individuals and governments. Hence, they are positive investment.
There are several reasons for this view that alternative sources such as wind or solar are beneficial for people. In my view, the most important reason is, reduce pollution in cities also, decrease of disease among individuals. Nowadays, majority of cars as well as companies utilize of fossil fuels for energy production. Emission of toxic gases from these machines, like CO can have detrimental impacts on the individual’s health and ozone layer. The hearth problem and breath damages because of inhaling fumes in air are the sample of these diseases. In addition, penetrate of ozone layer also, lead to publish of X-ray on the surface earth, that is destructive for human skin, and can become cause of skin illnesses. In contrast, Alternative sources, not only, do not have any above negative effects, but also help to clean air. Also, they are not harmful to people health. For this reason are suitable for using.
Another reason for being benefit alternative sources is, these resources are infinity and cheaper than fossil fuels. According to the witnesses of researcher, fossil fuels will finish by 2050. Therefore, the governments should find other sources for replacing it. Wind and solar are the best substitute because, they are accessible everywhere. Also, they have a sufficient powerful for energy production in companies and cars. Likewise, cost of their production is much inexpensive compared to fossil fuels. We need to the advance technologies and special equipment for drilling earth in order to extraction of petroleum or gas. But, for producing of solar energy, for example, we just require the number of plate placed in front of the sun.
To sum up, utilization from replacing sources like wind or sun instead of fossil fuels, is an excellent idea, not only for people throughout the world because of reducing illnesses(e.g: hearth and skin ailments), but also is beneficial for government since, these sources are economical and available.
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- maps 11
- The flowchart shows how concentrated apple juice is produced. 78
- Nowadays more and more business meetings and business trainings are taking place online.Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 61
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- do spend money for sports or cultural places is a positive development? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, likewise, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28225806452 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75672796642 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577956989247 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5142247553 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3181818182 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138970921791 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421937092052 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587080377028 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984397794716 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345607862794 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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