Although abuse of the system are inevitable, social welfare payment are essential to protect the right citizen have to guarantee minimum income in democratic society.
Nowadays, social welfare is an indispensable element of an advanced society. Good systems has always been exploited. But that does not mean they are faulty. In my opinion, there are below reasons why social welfare an indemnified minimum income in an egalitarian society.
Firstly, sometimes social welfare will make people work on the job lackadaisical and they would in turn become unemployed purposely to earn easy money. Moreover, this would have a negative impact on those people who are really unemployed, even having superior qualifications. On the contrary, it would rise in overall percent...
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Good systems are always been exploited.
Good systems are always being exploited.
Good systems have always been exploited.
why social welfare an indemnified minimum income in an egalitarian society.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence? can you re-write this sentence?
these should be proper controls
these should be properly controlled
there should be proper controls
Sentence: Firstly, sometimes social welfare will make people work on the job lackadaisical and they would in turn become unemployed purposely to earn easy money.
Error: lackadaisical Suggestion: ?
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